http://www.moviefone.com/movie/the-help/51988/trailers
This video is about to a film. The film's name is 'THE HELP'. I like this film very much because there are many right points about the truth. The lady in this video is Octavia Spencer,who plays the character Minny in the new Dreamworks movie 'the Help'. She gives us information about the film. Actually, this video is interview.The film tells about the racism between black and white.This is very bad situation. I always sorry about it and the film express it very well. Maybe I like it very much for this reason. In the video, she explained her thoughts,her ideas and her emotions very sincerely and faithfully. In the end, she said that she hoped to be solved this discrimination and I wish this happened..
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Hi Mine;) I like your choice so much. Although I haven't seen the film yet, I am sure it's about important issues. So, I'd love to watch it immediately. If come to your writing, I want to say a few things. First of all, I think you wanted to write 'it is about a film' at the beginning. Because, 'about to' means something is going to happen very soon. Secondly, maybe you should be more careful about punctuation. In the second sentence, you should use comma after 'because'. Then, you should pay more attention to articles. For example; 'this video is an interview' or 'this is a very bad situation'. Also, in my opinion there is a meaning loss in the second sentence. 'There are many right points about the truth' doesn't come to me so sensible. Maybe, you could say 'I like this film very much, because it is about important ongoing issues.' These are just a few suggestions from me.:) I hope you'll take into consideration.
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