Generally, society can be defined this way: Society consists of a group of people who share the same values in one area. Societies advances and progresses by themselves.There are some goals of the societies. Firstly, society wants to improve the qualities of the life so it tries to provide some opportunities such as qualified education. Secondly, it wants to develop to our knowledge about everything. In order to carry out this, it tries to everyone to be active in the society. In our society, something is very important such as family, older people,traditions,customs etc..I think we must protect them for the sake of our nation because we need to society in order to survive, in order to be happy as a individual,in order to feel safe. I can claim that every person in the world which we can live needs to a society,a common society due to the fact that we are born with this need.
Dear Mine,
YanıtlaSilI really liked your topic but I think you could enhance your writing by giving some interesting facts about socities or information about socities' history.
When I examine your writing grammatically, I think there is an incongruity between subject and verbs in this sentence: "Societies advances and progresses by themselves."
Finally, I liked reading your ideas about the topic.
All the best! :))